Thinking about a scene and looking for feedback

Thinking about a scene and looking for feedback

Matthious​(dom male) • Jun 11, 2021

The scene is dom is a vampire and sub is a prisoner and the dom is trying to "persuade"the prisoner to voluntarily turn or become a thrall. Prisoner is blindfolded and tied up in the middle of a room and vampire is walking around them taunting and trying to persuade them and if they do something the vamp doesn't like they get a swat from a piece of rope or other tool and thats kind of were you can do your own thing from there.....

If have any criticism I'm open to it and any ideas to make it better much thanks to you.

SubtleHush​(sub female) • Aug 2, 2021

I think you mean role play.