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The Voices in My Head

Just a girl with paper and pen trying to sort out what is in her head.
3 years ago. October 17, 2020 at 3:37β€―PM

I found myself on a much needed adventure yesterday.  A small hike that ended up taking me hours into the forest.  It soothes me. 

Drawn to the water I watched how it carved it’s way through the land as if it owned her.  It’s hard not to draw comparisons.  Both the land and water have strength beyond measure, yet eventually the land submits and the water carves it’s way through her being.  He smooths her edges, finding comfort in the pools of her curves.  He brings life with the balance it brings her.  He can come in raging rapids, or (like in this picture) a subtle steady stream that reminds her that he is still present.   Once carved, she offers him a safe place to be, where his efforts aren’t wasted to dry up on the flat surrounding land.  The challenge of power unyielding between them, never ending.  Even in the harshest of seasons, his marks are left behind.  It’s a beautiful and powerful thing to witness, her submission. 

 

Morley​(sub female){Max Sterne} - Wow absolutely beautiful, both the imagery and the words and how you have so eloquently described the strength and submission in nature. So beautiful!!! Thank you for sharing! ❀️
3 years ago
kittenforplay​(sub female) - Thank you so much! πŸ’•
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slavebilly​(sub male) - Loved it! I used to spend hours doing the same thing when I was younger. I would follow a stream as far as I could to see the path it had chosen
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kittenforplay​(sub female) - That sounds amazing! I bet you had some amazing adventures doing that. πŸ’•
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slavebilly​(sub male) - Yes, I did. One time though I wound up in the middle of a briar patch! That was a bloody experience πŸ˜–πŸ˜–
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kittenforplay​(sub female) - Ahhh!!! Those are the BEST times!!! I climbed up a mountain once thinking I was on a trail only to realize I was most definitely NOT on the trail and the only way down was scooting down a tiny mud river down the other slide!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ About halfway down my slide I was regretting my life decisions and praying I wasn’t going to have to call in backup to save me! 😳
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kittenforplay​(sub female) - I should have mentioned scooting down on my ASS!
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slavebilly​(sub male) - Lol. How long did that hurt?
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kittenforplay​(sub female) - It actually wasn’t too bad, just a couple bumps on the way down, but there was mud in places mud should never be.... πŸ˜³πŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
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slavebilly​(sub male) - Lol
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AmusedDaddy​(dom male) - From this and your other posts it looks like you have access to some incredible and unspoiled nature.
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kittenforplay​(sub female) - I most definitely do. California is great for anything from the ocean to the snow. It’s a great place to live. πŸ’•
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Naya - This is beautiful. Thank you x
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GoldenIdol​(dom male) - I love the comparison you make. It's honest and humble. You are so right in how the bedrock we build our lives upon submits and gives way to the water that washes over it. I love living at the ocean and watching the waves crash upon the cliffs and rocks and sandy beaches here. Like a desperate man wanting her attention, her love and admiration, he throws himself on her hoping to mark his territory, to leave a lasting impression and be taken in by her where the two of them together create a life together that wasn't there before.

You have a fantastic view of the world around you. It's positive and unassuming. It really makes your writing something that is very enjoyable.
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