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Don't Step On The Mome Raths

I know our cloaked and veiled existence in the back of the closet makes it a dark place to dwell in, but don't worry. I'll be your rainbow, disco magic firefly. Let's go explore, turn over some rocks, look at bugs, find agates and fossils in the riverbeds and climb up into our tree house to read while the rain makes magic music on the roof. Once we're nice and comfy in that space, maybe you'd try to lock eyes with me to wrestle her from underneath.

You'll definitely enjoy getting to know me. I'm light-hearted, smart, funny, and authentic. We could talk for hours, you and I. Share laughs, have deep, meaningful talks. But her? The right person will want to find her and bring her out. She's the challenge. She's the one who will test you, see what you're made of. She's a tough nut, but there's great reward what does not come easy. Good luck!
1 year ago. Monday, September 30, 2024 at 11:47 AM

I welcome your feedback on my first installment published in my blog. I am interested in gauging the reception here to see if it is worth a fourth, fifth or sixth installment being written, and I posted the first in a hurry. There are edits to be made, both grammatical and punctual, but I'm aware of those matters. 

However, I would very much enjoy your honest feedback about the story itself. Kindly, of course. 

Respectfully,  

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