rosethorn(sub female)

Rose's Thorns.

A general pondering.

A poem - i have zero clue if it even works as one but ... sod it.

6 years ago. March 3, 2019 at 3:03 PM

Blackest star, deepest night,

not a twinkle in sight.

As Blackness eclipses the night,

a heart beats

out of sight.

Vast unyielding space

without end in sight

where once was a beat

nothing exists any longer,

just Depth inside.

Depth without bottom

is the cruellest of ends

as the unending bleak horizon

expands beyond end.

No longer a nightmare

beyond a dream.

Time, fabric and context

become an undying end.

TakenLower - In my opinion it doesn’t matter if it fits a definition of poetry with a meter and everything. Art shouldn’t be defined.

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - Thanks, I tried but genuinely have zero clue.

6 years ago

Max Sterne(dom male){Morley} - Oh yes it does work, and it deep and ethereal. Have you thought of what you would lime to name your poem?

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - not sure.

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - I would like to call it the darkest shade of black which is vantablack…. its such a bad name I cant do it.

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - I would like to call it the darkest shade of black which is vantablack…. its such a bad name I cant do it.

6 years ago

Max Sterne(dom male){Morley} - Why is that a bad name? Vantablack!!! Very cool!

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - Thanks, just seems the darkest shade of black should have a cooler name, the scientists missed an opportunity there.

6 years ago

Max Sterne(dom male){Morley} - How about....Hellblack?

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - sounds much better but I liked the concept of the blackest possible as its actually absorbs light, how about starless night ?

6 years ago

Max Sterne(dom male){Morley} - That would work especially with stars referenced at the beginning. Possibly Starless Void as an option?

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - I like the void bit :)

6 years ago

Max Sterne(dom male){Morley} - ?

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - As you can likely tell im missing BDSM and when your mentally masochistic its an odd place to be.

6 years ago

Cithaeria - How about Black Hole. Beautiful poem

6 years ago

rosethorn(sub female) - thanks :) cool idea

6 years ago

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rosethorn​(sub female)

Rose's Thorns.

A poem - i have zero clue if it even works as one but ... sod it.

rosethorn(sub female)