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3 weeks ago. October 3, 2024 at 6:22 PM

Sir's assignment for me today was to do things that would please him. This is the first thing I did to please him today. I wrote a poem. The first paragraph is in reference to a comment he made that he wanted me to wear a dress in the garden. When I was confused, he said "Because I might want to 'take you' there." The paragraph about Scottish Heather is a reference to the Victorian stories I've been reading.

 

A Victorian poem for "country Sir"

By Melanie T. Campbell

10-3-24

 

Take Me

 

Take me in the garden,

Underneath the skies so blue,

Where puffy clouds live way up high,

Cast shadows on we two.

 

Take me behind the hedgerow,

At the gathering of a friend,

The secret delights you give me,

Seemingly have no end.

 

Take me in the Heather,

High in the Scottish hills,

Seeing you above me,

Gives my heart a swelling thrill.

 

Take me at the campfire,

As we journey to and fro,

Where the searing heat from logs aflame,

Cannot hold a candle to you.

 

Take me on the Terrace,

In light of the Harvest Moon,

Your soft breath upon my neck,

Encourages me to swoon.

 

Take me in the forest,

So dark and oh so dreer,

Where only woodland creatures,

With watchful eyes appear.

 

Take me in the church pew,

When all have gone abed, 

You are very naughty Sir,

So naughty, my breathless lips said.

 

So take me where you wish Sir,

Whether real or in my dreams,

There is no place in heaven or earth,

Where you have not taken me.

dedelost​(sub female){Lost} - I love your poetry. The use of dreer is brilliant. It is a new word to me, so Yay, I learned something new today.
3 weeks ago
lambsone - Glad you enjoyed it.
3 weeks ago
Sweetlydepraved​(masochist female){Owned} - That’s very beautiful
3 weeks ago
lambsone - Thank you.
3 weeks ago

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