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well, it's dark bits of prose, isn't it?
4 years ago. April 14, 2020 at 6:21 PM

This is neither prose nor dark, but I read a comment in a forum that made me think of something I wrote several years ago, and here it is:

AFTER

You haven't lived until she dances just for you,

under the kitchen lights,

naked except for the gray cotton shirt;

Southside Johnny demanding

'Talk to meee!'

Freedom, love and light -- the trifecta of bad poetry--

She embodies, makes holy.

She laughs, arms waving above her head.

The gray cotton shirt pulled higher...

Magic.

Her joy calls out, and even the stones respond.

She leans closer

still dancing, singing;

noses touch, more laughing.

     You haven't lived until she dances just for you

      in the small hours under kitchen lights.

Literate Lycan​(dom male) - Well done!
4 years ago
Grey Eyes​(sub female){Owned} - Love it
4 years ago
Miss Magdalena​(sub female){FreeSpirit} - Very nice!
4 years ago
Satindragon{Not Lookin} - I love this!! Dancing around in his shirt is one of my favorite things to do. 😊
4 years ago
SSG{ENM-TLP} - beautiful!
4 years ago
Sensual City Girl{ForeverHIS} - Thank you for sharing this, it’s a beautiful sentiment to envision.
4 years ago
Bunnie - This brought back some really beautiful memories (and a few little tears). Love it, thank you for sharing :)
4 years ago
Mister Anderson​(dom male) - some of the warmest memories are born out of the coldest storms.
4 years ago

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