So i have a story to share that I wrote with a Dom. I was talking to this Dom seriously and he even conversed with some of my friends. He had an idea that we write a story together because he knows my love writing and expressing myself. In the course of writing this and us seriously discussing .my submission he was approached by another here on cage. He apparently replied and poof the story didnt have the Doms end, and I was left spinning. Even though a pheonix will rise were bond to crash and burn up eventually!
Part 1:
She sits in the cabin remembering the day of adventure. She took this trip to recenter to be alone. The windows are open and there is a cold breeze coming in so she goes to the fire place and starts a fire. She gets it going but the incredible feeling of the heat on her keeps her right there. Shes in her little thin white cotton nightgown and nothing else. She sits in front of the fire place closing her eyes soaking in the heat. The cool breeze floats off the lake in through the window and kisses her back. Such different feelings the heat and cold. There are no lights on in the cabin just the candles soft glow and the fire place.
She came here to try to understand his offer. Could she do what he asked could she give herself to someone completely without question or hesitation. It was 2 days ago when he asked her to be his, mind body and soul. She told him she need to process what that meant and he gave her the space. Hed texted her that morning and she told him where she was going and ended with a question. She didnt tell him where she was there would be no service so she wouldnt see his answer. Her question she remembered well " what does that mean to be yours? Can one ever really belong to one person?"
• 48 hours felt like an eternity, he tried to stay busy, he loves to work with his hands, he goes to his workshop and tries to keep his mind off of her. His kitten, he knew right away that she was what he wanted. The way she reeled him in with her words, mysterious, exciting, sexy. It had only been a short time since their paths had crossed, but immediately he felt that ache of want. He had asked her to be his, he wanted her, only her. The way her eyes gazed at him he knew she wanted him to. The hesitation, she was scared, confused, she wanted him but just couldn’t say those words. I am yours! She had asked him to give her some time. Of course he would give her all the time she needed, but please don’t make me wait he thinks. He gets the message, she is going to the cabin, and the question she had asked plays through his mind. He knew what he had to do and immediately got on his motorcycle and began the drive to get his one, his kitten, his love! He arrives and finds her walking around the lake. She is beautiful, he stays away, just watching her, he spends hours staying at s close distance, he can tell she is struggling and all he wants to do is grab her and pull her to him, holding her and keeping her safe. But not yet. She moves to the cabin as the sun sets, she is starting a fire, she is beautiful in her white nightgown, he can’t stop it he needs her and the time is now! He slips in the cabin and moves to the bedroom as she leans over to stir the fire. He moves to the bed and takes the flower Petels from his bag, he arranges them in the bed to say the word,Words, soul mates! Two simple words, but they encompass all that he feels. He lights candles and places them in the room, he sits in the corner chair waiting for her to enter....
She had a strange feeling earlier at the lake a sense of being watched. She thought about that as she sat by the fire. What could it have been. It didnt scare her but made her feel safe and not so alone. While she was thinking of this she heard a noise some sort of scraping sound or a zipper... no it was just in her imagination no way that is what she heard she was the only person around for miles..
She stirred the fire and started to think about the last time she was with him. How he touched her his lips caressed her skin how badly she wanted him to kiss her everywhere. Her hands started to wander over her night gown. Remembering how his hands felt on her skin. How it felt so right. She let her fingers slide slowly down her chest and then rubbed her breast oh to feel his lips here as she pinched a nipple.. then she heard another sound and snapped out of her fantasy.
She decided that wasnt in her head she heard that so she gets up quietly looks around and she notices a light glow from the bedroom. She racks her brain did she leave the light on... no it wasnt bright enough for a light. She slowly inches toward the room panic starting to set in. Someone is here she can feel it she knows. She realizes the panic isnt that at all its excitement why the hell is she excited. There is someone in the cabin and they are in her room. She tiptoes more, closer to the door inching slowly... she pushes the door and gasps.. she sees the bed the words on it... instantly she knows hes here.
She walks slowly into the room and sees him sitting in the chair a small smirk on his face. She feels moisture between her legs the intense desire to be his but the flash of anger gets her too... you she says.. but how.. why and this.. she motions to the bed then she sees it in his hand hes holding a paper the arrangement he had shown her before and instantly she drops to her knees.
• That’s it kitten, I have given you 2 days, it is time to decide! I will be yours, yours alone, you will be mine and mine alone! You asked me and now it’s time for me to show you. He sets the paperwork down on the bed as he walks up to her. she had instantly gotten into the pose he had taught her, nadu head bowed, legs spread, on her knees with hands palms up on her thighs. You have practiced , that pleases me. But before we can begin I need an answer, he pulls something from a bag, she still has her bowed and has not moved. Kneel in front of me. She immediately gets to her knees and crawls to his feet, head still bowed not making eye contact. I smile to myself knowing I have her! She is in position now, look at me now kitten! She raises her head slowly and there’s eyes meet, I instantly get hard, god she is beautiful he thinks to himself, trying not to let any emotions bubble to the surface. I pull a collar from behind my back and say, kitten this symbolizes out commitment to each other, if you allow me to place this, then from this point on you belong to me! I will care for you, love you, honor you and help you become the best you can be, but you have to do so willingly... it is time to make a choice, yes or no, his heart feels like it is going to pound right out of his chest. He needs her and knows she is almost his..
She didnt underatand why she went to her knees automatic reaction to him. The position he taught her days before the one she thought was crazy. She wasnt sure what he was saying but then she heard it his command to look at him.
Slowly she raised her eyes to meet his and in that moment she knew she was his undeniably his. She barely noticed the shiny silver in his hands then his words snapped her out of her daze. Her eyes flashed at the dainty silver thread in his hands. It was the most beautiful thing she had ever seen. Thin silver chain with a small rose. The clasp she could see locked.
She moved close to him crawled to him and assumed the position again. She spoke words that would forever change her, Sir this sub asks to be yours mind body and soul but in asking I need you to know you also will have my heart be careful with it because it is fragile. Please accept my submission and I will do all I can to be the best for you
She then dropped her gaze again and waited for his response. The seconds felt like minutes and minutes felt like hours.. she needed to hear his words feel what he felt.
She wanted to touch him grab him and kiss him to say thank you but she knew she had to wait...
