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4 years ago. April 15, 2019 at 6:38 AM

Oh what a cunning little toy we have
Most lethal of them all
Not of leather or steel

Oh what with its velveteen blade
Sheathed within its ivory cage
Draped behind two fluid doors

Oh what brute power it contains
Sadistic and seductive it reigns
No evident markings left in its wake

Oh what equally weighted tip and grap
So easily swung to and fro
Lacking need of sight or thought

Oh what a dangerous thing we ignore
Forgetting the most basic rule
Skill and control of any tool we bring

Oh what a cunning little toy is this
That double bladed instrument in our trap
Tread carefully now

Oh its known to kill as well as caress
Like a Bull in a China shop
Its chaos if left unchecked

Oh it's a dangerous little toy indeed
If not seated and reined
It becomes our own undoing

Oh that foolish little toy we call a tongue
If let run without reguard
Destroy ones life completely

 

 

lil_dirtysugar​(sub gender fluid) - Brilliant prose. Truely some of the best stanzas ive read forever. i so wished you had left out the t word. Your clever words told it brilliantly. No need to cheapen the experience for any in class that didnt follow along. Luv it!
4 years ago
MsNevermore​(other female) - I deliberated over that very thing...when sharing elsewhere I may edit it out. Thank you for the input. Why I post most of my musings here first.
4 years ago
lil_dirtysugar​(sub gender fluid) - i was unsure about my comment. i didnt want to offend. At the same time i just felt with the level of skill and crafting went into some of those lines... i just had to.
4 years ago

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