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2 years ago. December 5, 2021 at 2:47β€―PM

One quiet fall morning a young girl came upon a wide joining of two streams in the meadow. She saw a beautiful swan on the far side - "come join me" said the swan to the young girl - "but how? I cant . . .I cannot get over there"

"All you have to do is close your eyes and wish" . . . so she did, she closed her eyes and wished "I wish to be on the other side".

She slowly opened her eyes, only to discover she was still there, where she started.

"I cannot" . . . "You must try harder" - so once again she closed her eyes,  she concentrated "I wish, I wish . . . To be on the other side!"

Again, upon opening her eyes . . . She was still there.

"If you could come over to my side we could play all day and have the greatest of fun", pleaded the swan.

"I cannot do it!. . . I have tried and tried!"  She sat in the tall grass and began to weep.

"The water is too deep and the distance too far!"

"You CAN do it, I promise you"

 

The stream hurried about its business of tattling and tossing - as streams do - and the morning began to agree with the afternoon.

 

"Please try one more time little one, please?"

The swan asked with lament and sorrow

"You can do it,  I know you can"

"Why cant you come to me!?" Asked the girl back - beginning to get a bit angry at it all.

"Swans are not permitted on that side, . . . I thought you knew"

She contemplated this  . . . 

"Why not?" . . . 

The swan looked down at its reflection and did not respond for a long while.

"Because", it finally said softly . . . "Once you cross you can never go back"

The young girl looked towards her home, and back again at the swan . . . 

"Never?" She asked, confused

"Never" replied the swan,"but it is much, much better over here"

She looked away, in deep contemplation now

The sun was getting tired . . .

She looked back again at her home - it seemed farther away somehow, and had begun to crumble over the autumn hills.

"Please little one, it is time - try again - I believe in you!"

She stood and fixed herself, pleats and bows just so - and closed her eyes . . . 

"Thats it! Come on, you can do it!"

 

"I wish . . . . I wish . . . 

She began, with all her might

"To be . . . ."

The stream stopped 

"On . . ."

The heavens looked down

"The . . . "

The earth stood silent

 

She let go . . . .completely  . . . With everything she had

 

". . . . Other side!"

 

 

 

 

 

 

~ the beginning

Satindragon{Not Lookin} - I agree that this is be beginning of the perfect bedtime story. Perhaps you might agree to put it in voice.

…….πŸ¦‹
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
Audio? πŸ€”
Theres an idea. ☺

Thank you for the compliment, both of you ⚘
2 years ago
Sweet Ginger​(sub female){βš“ } - Very interested. Can't wait to read the next chapter of the story.
2 years ago
HurtSoGood - Keep it coming! I'm intrigued 😁😁
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
Thank you all - girls,
im very flattered ☺ 😚
⚘

(After I wrote this I drank some whiskey, split fire wood, and slapped some strange girl passing by on the ass. πŸ’ͺ aaarrr!!)

😏
2 years ago
Blondie​(sub female){Collared} - More please!
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
You girls are insatiable!, lol
I will see what I can do Ms Blondie
😚⚘
2 years ago
Satindragon{Not Lookin} - That’s why you love us…..πŸ¦‹
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
The den, I dub this place . . .
"The den"!
πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒ
2 years ago
Apkrodite​(sub female){ForeverHis} - Beautiful new beginnings β˜ΊοΈπŸ’œ
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
Thank you Ms Apkrodite, for that ☺⚘
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
*For the record - easily distracted, yes - absol . . . .holy crap! You see that!??

Public slap?? Never!!


I'z just play'n. πŸ˜‡
2 years ago
Apkrodite​(sub female){ForeverHis} - πŸ˜‡,= I think not!πŸ˜‚
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
"Im not bad, im just drawn that way." 😏
2 years ago
Morley​(sub female){Max Sterne} - This to me is such an awesome write (no surprise with your talent) yet it's painstaking beautiful!

I find a lot of sorrow, hurt, and contemplation, here... YET

I hope the beauty of your writing hits one in this state and gives them the light/hope they need! Again, you're a beautiful writer, Jack! Awesome share ❀️🀍🌼
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
*removes hat - a curt bow and a bit of blush

Why thank you Ms Morley, thank you indeed. 😚⚘
2 years ago
Morley​(sub female){Max Sterne} - As you know, I don't give compliments or credence to just anyone, so your bow is taken with grace!! Thank you!
2 years ago
Jack in the box - 😚
2 years ago
Jack in the box -
That is . . .
A gentle kiss upon your cheek
2 years ago

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