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PIE

4 years ago. April 13, 2020 at 5:59 PM

PIE

She served him pie she knew was ruined.

Then stood there, practically daring him to say something. She watched him choke down each dry, charred, mouthful. 

In barely a whisper,"i burnt it on purpose ."

over and over, like a cliched suburban mantra.

Her husband didn't hear her, but the boy did. He heard and remembered.

 

Years later, when his wife burned dinner, he was ready.

 

No Body​(dom male) - My ex hated when I choked down a cake she made for me once. I had one slice before she threw it out. I came home the next day and she had another ready. That first bite I thought heaven had sent it down to me. I ate 1/4 of it before I stopped. It was the one and only time I ever had bad food from her. I still wonder what I did to piss her off ... I never asked.
4 years ago
Mister Anderson​(dom male) - I'm sure you deserved it. We always do.
4 years ago
SSG{ENM-TLP} - maybe she was trying to say that she was dessert.
4 years ago
Mister Anderson​(dom male) - maybe. one can always hope
4 years ago
SchrodingersDinosaur​(switch female){N/a} - Geez, maybe the wife just forgot to set the timer...it happens. 🤷
4 years ago
Mister Anderson​(dom male) - that's a great screen name, btw
4 years ago
Pheonix J​(sub female) - This was an excellent thought provoking post. Thank you
4 years ago
rare jewel​(sub female){none} - The cold that is there and the possible underlying sweet You bring out once Your done with her, Sir.
Yesss ⚘⚘⚘
4 years ago

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